Post by GraphicAl on Jul 2, 2016 3:36:15 GMT
Dedicated to someone who's given me feedback on all of my stories, IG-100
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"Come on kid, wake up."
As I open my eyes I see the bus driver standing over me. I sigh and quickly stand up, mumbling 'sorry' as I walk off the bus.
"Blake! Over here!" My bestfriend, Jess, yells at me.
"Hey Jess" I say back as I give her a hug.
"How're you, Blake?"
"Fine, and you?"
"Good! So, did you fini---" A loud ringing interrupts her and we both turn to see that everyones filing inside. Thank god. Saved by the bell. See, even though Jess is my bestfriend, I've been in love with her since 8th grade year, but she hasn't really noticed.
Its lunch now and I was happily eating by myself when Jess sat by me, a little closer than usual.
"Hey Blake." Jess says to me while watching me eat.
"Hello, Jess." I respond blankly.
"Will you kiss me" She asks, looking at me shyly.
"What!?" I half yell, nearly gagging on my bologna and cheese sandwhich.
"I mean, will you kiss me?"
"Why, Jess?"
"Because Justin is over there kissing some chick"
Dangit! I knew it was too good to be true!
"Well, Will you Blake?" She asks impatiently.
"Sure, bu--" I'm cut off by her soft lips meeting mine. In instinct, I try to pull away, but she keeps me locked in the kiss until Justin walks up.
"Jess?" Justin says, which causes Jess to pull away from me almost instantly.
"Yes, Justin?" She looks at him, obviously checking him out.
"What're you doing with that loser?" He says nodding his head towards me.
"He's not a loser, Justin."
"Yeah, sure. Anyway, Come hang with me" He says and pulls her away from the table without letting her answer.
Well... That was fun while it lasted...
"Blake!" I hear a familiar voice from my sleepy daze
"Whatttt Jess." I respond, annoyed.
"Justin-- Justin hit-- hit me" Jess replies through sobs.
I instantly bolt up and turn on my bedside lamp.
"Oh my god, Jess!" I yell as I see the blood running down the side of her forehead.
"I'm sorry for-- for waking you up" She cries at me.
"Its okay, come here" I say as soothingly as I can, and she does. I let her lay down and grab her a rag, placing it over the cut on her head.
Soon enough shes dead asleep.
"Goodbye, Jess." I say as I kiss her on the forehead as I grab the pocket knife my dad gave me for my birthday last year. I walk out and grab my dads car keys, unlocking his car and getting in it.
"Time for revenge" I mutter to myself before starting the car and driving to a place where I see Justin hang outside at alot.
When I get there I see Justin hanging out with 2 other guys from our school outside of a old diner. I park the car around the corner and get out, gripping the open pocket knife hard. I quickly walk up to them with the knife visible in my hand.
"H-hey Justin!" I stutter.
"Hey it's--" He looks down at the knife "Kid, put the knife down before something happens."
"No!" I yell, "You hurt Jess!"
"She deserved it" He says, as he walks closer to me.
"And you deserve this!" I yell as I lunge at him, piercing him in the right side of his lower chest. As soon as I do I get hit in the back of the head with something hard and cold, falling over. As I turn around I see the outline of a gun.
"D-d-don't... P-please" I stutter, trying not to cry.
"Too late, boy. Should'a just left." The guy from behind the gun says. I hear a loud bang and a sharp pain tears through my forehead.
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The... Uh.... End...
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"Come on kid, wake up."
As I open my eyes I see the bus driver standing over me. I sigh and quickly stand up, mumbling 'sorry' as I walk off the bus.
"Blake! Over here!" My bestfriend, Jess, yells at me.
"Hey Jess" I say back as I give her a hug.
"How're you, Blake?"
"Fine, and you?"
"Good! So, did you fini---" A loud ringing interrupts her and we both turn to see that everyones filing inside. Thank god. Saved by the bell. See, even though Jess is my bestfriend, I've been in love with her since 8th grade year, but she hasn't really noticed.
Its lunch now and I was happily eating by myself when Jess sat by me, a little closer than usual.
"Hey Blake." Jess says to me while watching me eat.
"Hello, Jess." I respond blankly.
"Will you kiss me" She asks, looking at me shyly.
"What!?" I half yell, nearly gagging on my bologna and cheese sandwhich.
"I mean, will you kiss me?"
"Why, Jess?"
"Because Justin is over there kissing some chick"
Dangit! I knew it was too good to be true!
"Well, Will you Blake?" She asks impatiently.
"Sure, bu--" I'm cut off by her soft lips meeting mine. In instinct, I try to pull away, but she keeps me locked in the kiss until Justin walks up.
"Jess?" Justin says, which causes Jess to pull away from me almost instantly.
"Yes, Justin?" She looks at him, obviously checking him out.
"What're you doing with that loser?" He says nodding his head towards me.
"He's not a loser, Justin."
"Yeah, sure. Anyway, Come hang with me" He says and pulls her away from the table without letting her answer.
Well... That was fun while it lasted...
"Blake!" I hear a familiar voice from my sleepy daze
"Whatttt Jess." I respond, annoyed.
"Justin-- Justin hit-- hit me" Jess replies through sobs.
I instantly bolt up and turn on my bedside lamp.
"Oh my god, Jess!" I yell as I see the blood running down the side of her forehead.
"I'm sorry for-- for waking you up" She cries at me.
"Its okay, come here" I say as soothingly as I can, and she does. I let her lay down and grab her a rag, placing it over the cut on her head.
Soon enough shes dead asleep.
"Goodbye, Jess." I say as I kiss her on the forehead as I grab the pocket knife my dad gave me for my birthday last year. I walk out and grab my dads car keys, unlocking his car and getting in it.
"Time for revenge" I mutter to myself before starting the car and driving to a place where I see Justin hang outside at alot.
When I get there I see Justin hanging out with 2 other guys from our school outside of a old diner. I park the car around the corner and get out, gripping the open pocket knife hard. I quickly walk up to them with the knife visible in my hand.
"H-hey Justin!" I stutter.
"Hey it's--" He looks down at the knife "Kid, put the knife down before something happens."
"No!" I yell, "You hurt Jess!"
"She deserved it" He says, as he walks closer to me.
"And you deserve this!" I yell as I lunge at him, piercing him in the right side of his lower chest. As soon as I do I get hit in the back of the head with something hard and cold, falling over. As I turn around I see the outline of a gun.
"D-d-don't... P-please" I stutter, trying not to cry.
"Too late, boy. Should'a just left." The guy from behind the gun says. I hear a loud bang and a sharp pain tears through my forehead.
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The... Uh.... End...