Post by GraphicAl on Feb 6, 2016 4:27:56 GMT
Crappy title, I know, But the BIGGGG story is done, I procrastinated so bad while making it. But... Yeah...
I don't like my own ending. I may have made a few mistakes, Give me a break. (Actually. I checked. None!)
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"Are you sure you aren't physicking yourself up?" James asked
"Yeah. I'm sure." I said back furiously
"I dunno."
"Neither do I."
As I stood up my legs trembled, It was just hitting thanksgiving break and James, Chloe, Veronica, Blake and I where heading out to Blake's' dad's cabin by the Rocky's.
That place always gave me the creeps, some weird things happened there, But as I walked on the bus and saw Veronica, The worry went all away.
"Stephen! Sit here!" Veronica said
As I walked over to sit by her, I didn't care about my worries, fears, or anything. I just cared about her.
It was a 13 hour drive, so while everyone slept I stayed up, looking at the night scenery, Feeling Veronica's slow breath against my neck. When we got there it was 8 A.M. We started to pile off the bus, chatter everywhere, There was a fresh blanket of snow on the mountain side. As I took in the scenery I saw the security cabin, Glass still stained with blood. A few years ago a security guy went missing.
We started walking up the stairs to the cabin. It was cold, Veronica cuddle up against me.
"I miss the old days" She said
"What old days?"
"When we dated. I feel safe with you"
She looked up at me, and I looked down into her eyes, sparkling gems in the early morning sunlight
"Maybe it can be like that again." I said
"Maybe" She smiled.
As we reached the top of the stairs Blake turned around.
"Welcome to casa de Blake" He said
"Casa de Blake's Dad, You mean?" Said James
"Real funny, James."
We walked in to the house, Blake put some wood into the fireplace. Me and Veronica sat down while James and Chloe did the thing where they put their noses together, I don't know, Not really into romance and stuff.
"Okay! Guys! Let go! UP PEOPLE! We're going for a hike!" Blake yelled
We all walked out but Blake was already gone.
"Blake?" I said
We all yelled for him, It was almost noon by the time we found him. He'd somehow fell off a cliff, His body lying there, cold and lifeless, A bit of fear struck through me. There was no cellphone reception and no one was coming until Thursday.
"What do we do" Chloe looked at me.
"Yeah, Stephen, What do we do" James asked
"Uhh, I don't know." I said "Lets get to the cabin"
By the time we got there, It was 5 P.M. and the sun was setting. Veronica hug up against me, Tightening her grip.
"It'll be okay." I said. She looked up at me.
"Promise?" She said
"Yeah. I promise." I looked down into her eyes, I could see her tears.
The house was calm, We had a few lights on, But it was still dark. I looked over at the window and saw a man in a mask with a long trench coat.
"What in the..." I said
"What is it?" James asked
"You see that?" I said, James looked out the window
"See what? Man. Let me get you some champagne" He said.
"No... No... I'm fine." But was I?
A few hours passed and we finally laid down on the couches, Me and Veronica on one and James and Chloe on the other. After everyone was asleep I felt safe enough to doze off also, But as soon as I did a loud smash woke us all up.
"Who's there!" James yelled
Me and Veronica sat up while she held on to me. James ran over to a shelf and pulled out a Glock 17 and loud Armor Piercing rounds
"Just in case" He said.
I held Veronica tighter, Chloe stood behind James but soon found her way to us and sat. James started up the stairs. Four loud and deafening bang followed by a scream had me squeezing Veronica a little to tight, Because she flinched a little and I loosened up, Then I saw James's body fly down the stairs with blood around his neck.
"James!" I yelled as I ran over to his body. I looked up the stairs and saw a horrifying sight, The man from outside.
"Surrrrprise" He said in a scratchy voice, Then he ran at me. I stood up instantly and ran to tackle him but he grabbed me and wrapped his giant hands around my neck and squeezed, I felt my lungs try to grab the air, Suck it in like a vacuum, Trying to do something, Something to save them from the pain, But they couldn't. I had my hands around his hand when I heard another bang and he dropped me, And ran off and busted through a glass door. I gasped for air, It tasted sweet.
"Stephen!" Veronica dropped the gun and ran over to me.
"I'm okay" I said, bringing her into a hug and kissed her on the forehead.
Chloe sat there, Tears in her eyes.
"We have to get out of here, Follow me" I said, As I lead them down the stairs and the path we came from. We walked along the road for a good hour when a man in a truck speed past us, Turned around, Then me and Veronica jumped into the bushes, But Chloe just stood there. There was a loud bang and the man drove off. We started walked in the snow by the road, Staying low enough to not be seen, Staying quiet. We walked all night and until noon, Where we finally got service. I called my mom.
Me: "Mom, We're scared, Blake, James and Chloe are dead... We need your help"
Mom: "I'm on my way, I'll track your phone, Don't worry Stephen, I'll get you home."
I hung up.
"My moms coming" I said as me and Veronica sat down in the snow, holding hands.
"Okay." She said.
Soon we both fell asleep. I didn't wake up until Veronica shook me on my shoulder.
"Your moms' here" She said.
I got up and we both got into the backseat. We road in silence for a good 2 hours. Then I saw the truck again, This time he ran right into us, Running us off the road into a cliff side. It was like slow motion, We hit the bottom on Veronica and Mom's side, And the car folded in, And then I blacked out.
I woke up 3 months later with Veronica, surprisingly sitting over me.
"What" I paused to catch my breath, Forcing myself to breath "Happened"
"We got rammed off the road, Your mom died on impact, And I was lucky to live, So where you." She said.
I felt the tears welling up in my eyes, I couldn't imagine it, Losing 4 people I cared about in 2 days. It wasn't fair. IT WASN'T FAIR! Anger heated my body and I couldn't speak. Until I realized a girl I loved so much was sitting here above me.
"I... Love... You..." I said slowly and painfully
"I love you too" She said, Tears in her eyes.
I don't like my own ending. I may have made a few mistakes, Give me a break. (Actually. I checked. None!)
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"Are you sure you aren't physicking yourself up?" James asked
"Yeah. I'm sure." I said back furiously
"I dunno."
"Neither do I."
As I stood up my legs trembled, It was just hitting thanksgiving break and James, Chloe, Veronica, Blake and I where heading out to Blake's' dad's cabin by the Rocky's.
That place always gave me the creeps, some weird things happened there, But as I walked on the bus and saw Veronica, The worry went all away.
"Stephen! Sit here!" Veronica said
As I walked over to sit by her, I didn't care about my worries, fears, or anything. I just cared about her.
It was a 13 hour drive, so while everyone slept I stayed up, looking at the night scenery, Feeling Veronica's slow breath against my neck. When we got there it was 8 A.M. We started to pile off the bus, chatter everywhere, There was a fresh blanket of snow on the mountain side. As I took in the scenery I saw the security cabin, Glass still stained with blood. A few years ago a security guy went missing.
We started walking up the stairs to the cabin. It was cold, Veronica cuddle up against me.
"I miss the old days" She said
"What old days?"
"When we dated. I feel safe with you"
She looked up at me, and I looked down into her eyes, sparkling gems in the early morning sunlight
"Maybe it can be like that again." I said
"Maybe" She smiled.
As we reached the top of the stairs Blake turned around.
"Welcome to casa de Blake" He said
"Casa de Blake's Dad, You mean?" Said James
"Real funny, James."
We walked in to the house, Blake put some wood into the fireplace. Me and Veronica sat down while James and Chloe did the thing where they put their noses together, I don't know, Not really into romance and stuff.
"Okay! Guys! Let go! UP PEOPLE! We're going for a hike!" Blake yelled
We all walked out but Blake was already gone.
"Blake?" I said
We all yelled for him, It was almost noon by the time we found him. He'd somehow fell off a cliff, His body lying there, cold and lifeless, A bit of fear struck through me. There was no cellphone reception and no one was coming until Thursday.
"What do we do" Chloe looked at me.
"Yeah, Stephen, What do we do" James asked
"Uhh, I don't know." I said "Lets get to the cabin"
By the time we got there, It was 5 P.M. and the sun was setting. Veronica hug up against me, Tightening her grip.
"It'll be okay." I said. She looked up at me.
"Promise?" She said
"Yeah. I promise." I looked down into her eyes, I could see her tears.
The house was calm, We had a few lights on, But it was still dark. I looked over at the window and saw a man in a mask with a long trench coat.
"What in the..." I said
"What is it?" James asked
"You see that?" I said, James looked out the window
"See what? Man. Let me get you some champagne" He said.
"No... No... I'm fine." But was I?
A few hours passed and we finally laid down on the couches, Me and Veronica on one and James and Chloe on the other. After everyone was asleep I felt safe enough to doze off also, But as soon as I did a loud smash woke us all up.
"Who's there!" James yelled
Me and Veronica sat up while she held on to me. James ran over to a shelf and pulled out a Glock 17 and loud Armor Piercing rounds
"Just in case" He said.
I held Veronica tighter, Chloe stood behind James but soon found her way to us and sat. James started up the stairs. Four loud and deafening bang followed by a scream had me squeezing Veronica a little to tight, Because she flinched a little and I loosened up, Then I saw James's body fly down the stairs with blood around his neck.
"James!" I yelled as I ran over to his body. I looked up the stairs and saw a horrifying sight, The man from outside.
"Surrrrprise" He said in a scratchy voice, Then he ran at me. I stood up instantly and ran to tackle him but he grabbed me and wrapped his giant hands around my neck and squeezed, I felt my lungs try to grab the air, Suck it in like a vacuum, Trying to do something, Something to save them from the pain, But they couldn't. I had my hands around his hand when I heard another bang and he dropped me, And ran off and busted through a glass door. I gasped for air, It tasted sweet.
"Stephen!" Veronica dropped the gun and ran over to me.
"I'm okay" I said, bringing her into a hug and kissed her on the forehead.
Chloe sat there, Tears in her eyes.
"We have to get out of here, Follow me" I said, As I lead them down the stairs and the path we came from. We walked along the road for a good hour when a man in a truck speed past us, Turned around, Then me and Veronica jumped into the bushes, But Chloe just stood there. There was a loud bang and the man drove off. We started walked in the snow by the road, Staying low enough to not be seen, Staying quiet. We walked all night and until noon, Where we finally got service. I called my mom.
Me: "Mom, We're scared, Blake, James and Chloe are dead... We need your help"
Mom: "I'm on my way, I'll track your phone, Don't worry Stephen, I'll get you home."
I hung up.
"My moms coming" I said as me and Veronica sat down in the snow, holding hands.
"Okay." She said.
Soon we both fell asleep. I didn't wake up until Veronica shook me on my shoulder.
"Your moms' here" She said.
I got up and we both got into the backseat. We road in silence for a good 2 hours. Then I saw the truck again, This time he ran right into us, Running us off the road into a cliff side. It was like slow motion, We hit the bottom on Veronica and Mom's side, And the car folded in, And then I blacked out.
I woke up 3 months later with Veronica, surprisingly sitting over me.
"What" I paused to catch my breath, Forcing myself to breath "Happened"
"We got rammed off the road, Your mom died on impact, And I was lucky to live, So where you." She said.
I felt the tears welling up in my eyes, I couldn't imagine it, Losing 4 people I cared about in 2 days. It wasn't fair. IT WASN'T FAIR! Anger heated my body and I couldn't speak. Until I realized a girl I loved so much was sitting here above me.
"I... Love... You..." I said slowly and painfully
"I love you too" She said, Tears in her eyes.