Post by GraphicAl on Jan 29, 2016 23:28:00 GMT
Idea for this story found at :: www.creative-writing-now.com/short-story-ideas.html
Story Idea - A stolen ring, fear of spiders, and a sinister stranger.
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This a first person story with little dialog outside of the characters mind.
** Are actions. Just a FYI
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Story Idea - A stolen ring, fear of spiders, and a sinister stranger.
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This a first person story with little dialog outside of the characters mind.
** Are actions. Just a FYI
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Light No More
By Advantageous Loss
By Advantageous Loss
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
Uh. What. Oh Yeah. School. Well. Uh. **Yawn** Let's get these blankets off. **Throws blanket off** **Walks over to closet and opens it** Hmm... What to wear, or what not to wear, that is the question. Hehe. Good one me. **Grabs Avenged Sevenfold shirt and black tights** **Dresses** **Puts on socks and black Nikes** **Grabs backpack and heads to school** Man. Where is everyone. Lets go people. School time. HELLLO? Oh. Its... Sund-- CHURCH!
"Hey Boy. What are you doing"
Hmm. Whe--
"Wake up."
Huh. Where am I?
"I need your help. I seem to have a ring that was stolen. But before you decide on helping or not, If you don't you're whole family will pay."
Oh. My. Did I hear that right?
"Alright sir. I'll help."
"Good. I know where the thief hid it."
Then why doe--
Ow.. Where am I? HOLY. **Gulp** Spiders... Spiders... Why spiders... But... My god... It's the ring.. **Stands up and bolts for the ring** **Grabs it** Woah. Are the spiders... Running at me? **Bolts off* Oh wow. This place is huge. **Gasps for air**
"Boy! GIVE ME THE RING AND I'LL HELP YOU OUT!"
**Throws ring to the man* Than-- DID HE JUST CLOSE THE DOOR... **Falls to knees** Oh... Their crawling all over me... Dad. Mom. Someone. HELP! **Opens mouth to yell** **Coughs out spiders** Holy crap. I'm going to die. I'm going to die. I feel them biting me. I am at peace. I am at peace. I am... Going to die. **Falls on to chest** What did I do to deserve this kind of punishment. God. Please help me. Lord please. Huh. Is that a hand. I can feel the warmth of the outside.
"Son. It's me."
Dad? Thank. God.
"How'd you find me?"
"I was checking on the ring. The man has it, huh?"
"Yeah..." **Starts crying**
"You're safe now... You're safe now..."
A loud bang.
"No. You're not."
A loud bang.
"No. You're not."
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